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you were just as a disturbing 4th grader as i was! i wrote poem about charred, black burning bodies. fun fun. but i must admit that this shows signs of ...

i, personally, liked it. then again, i also liked your old style better. this means more to me - it makes more sense and fullfills certains passions i can share ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: wow. i never laugh so much. i love you! this rocked. i'll never eat a hot dog the same way again

i could go on about labyrinth (and recite every line), but i'd much rather critique this poem. it's meaning was powerful, but as you tried to incorporate more labyrinth into ...

wow. i enjoyed this. it was short and sweet, but every word held new meaning. well, it was a bit repetitive, but only to get the point across, so i ...

this was repetitive, and you need to fix the " when there should be ' it is a good point, though.

i loved the ending...the middle dragged on a bit, but since it was all so beautiful, i did not mind so much. in fact, the entire thing filled my dull ...

why do you post poetry if you know that all your going to get is praise? :D it's not fair. i'd pout, but i'd have nothing to complain about, really. ...

epigone? i certainly hold you were referring to the man in the poem, and not you, yourself. most likely, as that would make sense. for if you claimed yourself mediocore ...

this poem was relatively good, but there was a major sag in it: and how I love you my sweet guy! But love of you will never hinder you to ...

wierd = W-E-I-R-D add line breaks. also, although this poem is cute, i urge you to tackle something more prominent and less like a second grade love letter in quality, ...

wow. your poetry is improving. it's like you're *sniff* all grown up. :cry: okay, i'm over that. best line: Although summer might coat my soul in rime rime. *shivers* image ...

There is a light that shines upon The floor, the fourth light, then The seventh. what? is there a point? i don't get it. Come, O gale. Please come. I ...

Their love like a whip excruciates me, "their love, like a whip, excruciates me" i didn't think the last stanza went with the rest of the poem. i mean, it ...

are you kidding me? i think my brain just died. nonetheless, it's cool, if not just decidely true. :lol: